Right Croc Purple-Left Croc Green
Left crocodile is green
Right one is purple;
Got them for a song
At the Stride-Rite Surple.
Right one is purple
Nana bought 2 pair
For two color wear.
Got them for a song!
The Outlets wholesale goods:
Style for town and woods.
At the Stride-Rite Surple
Where Murple and Moffet
Make small shoes for profit.
Jeanne Poland
All rights.
The Vibrant Channeled Creator 
Oct 05, 2012 @ 12:15:54
Very cute!
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Oct 05, 2012 @ 13:07:41
Delightful, Jeanne.
Tho, I wanted Stride Rite Surple (for surplus) had you considered this?
You are enjoying this form and I certainly am enjoying your creativity and reading your poems.
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Oct 06, 2012 @ 11:04:34
Joy
Thanx for the sug of “Surple”. I’m glad you put put surplus nearby.
I have to work on the last stanza which sounds right as “Murple and Moffit” rhyming with profit.
Merging the silly words and the anatomically correct ones is a daunting task!
Did you notice the word I made up in “The Cloud Moves In?”
Your input has surpassed that of David as my primary mentor. Another reason to love AZ!!!!!
Jeanne
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Oct 06, 2012 @ 14:23:43
Dear Joy
I edited to include Surple.
It’s perfect!
Jeanne
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