Orange creamsicles
twist ‘n turn
sliding down
the coaster throat
past the moat’s
speeding boat!
Jeanne Poland
The Vibrant Channeled Creator
Jeanne Poland's Poetry Blog
Jeanne Poland
Jeanne Poland's Poetry Blog
22 Feb 2013 4 Comments
in Uncategorized Tags: boat, coaster, creamsicles, moat, slide, throat, tickets
Orange creamsicles
twist ‘n turn
sliding down
the coaster throat
past the moat’s
speeding boat!
Jeanne Poland
The Vibrant Channeled Creator 
Feb 22, 2013 @ 11:12:58
Yum! I wish I could find one of these, right now, in our school cafeteria!
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Feb 22, 2013 @ 20:41:54
A fresh way to look at orange creamcicles. Thanks for sharing. =)
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Feb 22, 2013 @ 22:50:42
Jeanne, you wrote this for Laura’s picture. It’s great. The orange dreamsicles evoke such memories in some of us, don’t they? I still like that ‘coaster throat’!
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Feb 23, 2013 @ 12:34:15
It’s always noteworthy when there are 3 comments on a poem. And I want to thank Laura Purdie Salas for her 15 word prompts.They place me in the company of savvy poets who have no problem spelling creamsicles which keeps underlining in red and can’t be found in Websters. Is it a hyphen I’m missing? Cha-cha says I’m spelling it right! Those on-line dictionaries are pushing in for relevance!
Jeanne
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