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A Child Can Be…
13 Sep 2014 Leave a comment
in Family Tags: A Child Can Be..., High Praise for Gifted Poet and Post, marvelous piece, No Water River, Renee La Tulippe
Is the rainbow a two way street?
10 Sep 2014 1 Comment
in Family Tags: arbour, Can the wind blow a rainbow away?, combo, drifting by, rain, spectrum, sunshine, the wind
Rainbow shows spectrum
Sunshine-rain combo-arbour
Drifting by the wind.
Genuine First Reaction
08 Sep 2014 Leave a comment
in Family, Uncategorized Tags: awkward, Blurb, characters, child protagonists, detoxing from the Internet, genuine first reaction, in the Berkshires, Kurt Vonnegut, sweet and innocent, sympathy, visually memorable, vulnerability
I just got home from detox in the Berkshires.Two days without the internet. Slept better! Rested! Communication more lucid! No deadlines!
Here is what I noticed!
Blurb welcomed me home with these details on how to write for children:
In the words of Kurt Vonnegut: “Be a sadist. No matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them—in order that the reader may see what they are made of.”
Vulnerability inspires sympathy in a reader, and is an effective way of generating interest in a protagonist. But it’s even better when a character begins to learn from those situations, becoming stronger and less helpless.
Children and adolescents are naturally fluid; they grow both literally and figuratively from month to month.
Children are always experiencing situations for the first time—their reactions will likely be clumsy, unpolished, and very genuine.
everything really does seem larger when you’re very young.
Kids can be great characters because they’re a bit awkward. There’s nothing like a lost kid to stimulate empathy with a reader.
For example, fourteen-year-old June loves to secretly dress in boots her uncle bought at a Renaissance fair and an old play costume before going out to the woods and pretending she’s in the Middle Ages. June’s an unpopular kid, an oddball.and her eccentricities highlight one of the best parts of being a kid—the ability to be yourself before anyone tells you it’s wrong.
The best children’s books have stories and characters that are relatable and visually memorable.
Please go to this link, if you want to read by yourself:
http://www.blurb.com/blog/writing-illustrated-childrens-books?subscribed_to_blog_newsletter=yes
God in the cloud…
05 Sep 2014 Leave a comment
in Family Tags: caulk and grout, core and roots and ore, darkness underneath, drowned earth, God created land to separate the water from the water, God in the cloud, God shines from the cloud, mortar seams, not from dark waters
God shines from the cloud
Not from dark waters-drowned earth
Core and roots and ore.
Men use caulk and grout
Mortar seams keep water out-
Darkness underneath.
TractorTransport
04 Sep 2014 Leave a comment
in Family Tags: Fifteen words or less, Laura Purdie Salas, Tractor Transport
TractorTransportsTillerBlades
TractorTicklesTireTreads
TractorTinklesTanglesTwists
TractorTendersHugs
(Poems of 15 words or less)
Google Oogle
04 Sep 2014 Leave a comment
in Uncategorized Tags: crucial useful fuel, dual search for new jewels, Google Eyes by Annika, Google Oogle, Larry Paige and Sergey Brin, Oxford Dictionary, Poetry Almanac
Google Oogle Eyes
dual search for new jewels:
crucial useful fuel!
“Google” created by Larry Paige and Sergey Brin
1918
entered in the Oxford Dictionary in 2006
How does a Poet celebrate?
03 Sep 2014 Leave a comment
in Family Tags: close your eyes, gesture, glitter show of spoken poetry, grab each sound, How does a poet celebrate?, lock on eye-contact, memorize pace, Open Mic, practice, project that voice, repetoire, rhyme, rush, vibrate vibrant voice, Wok 'n Roll Cafe
Vibrate vibrant voice!
Lock on eye contact: gesture!
Memorize pace/rhyme!
Went to Open Mic for Poets @ the “Wok’n Roll” Cafe in Woodstock, NY.
The costumes were outstanding.
The practicing to perform well was evident.
Mimes accompanied the repertoire.
Those who knew how, closed their eyes to grab each sound.That brought in imagination,
the glitter show of spoken poetry.
What a rush!
An Op Stop
02 Sep 2014 Leave a comment
in Uncategorized Tags: An Op Stop, baubles flop, blinks drop, blunders plop, Bob in his bubble, bubbles pop, bull in shop, cream of crop, from the top, hear pin drop, whistle stop
An Op Stop
Blunders plop
Blinks drop!
Baubles flop
Bubbles pop!
Blow your top
Hear pin drop!
Cream of crop
Bull in shop!
Whistle stop
From the top!
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Jeanne Poland









