A villanelle: My Treasure’s in the Cloud!

My Treasure's in the Cloud!

My Treasure’s in the Cloud!

My treasure’s in the Cloud!
My i-Mac stored it there!
Its debut leaves me proud.

Six poets found it: “wow’d”
My writing in the air!
My treasure’s in the Cloud!

Its rhythm’s hot and loud
My pleasure’s theirs to share
Its debut leaves me proud!

Kerplunk! kerplutz! kerpow!
The beat’s a rock-jazz pair
My treasure’s in the Cloud!

It shakes your rhyme, I vow
Castanets to flair
Its debut leaves me proud!

So jump ‘n sway ‘n clap
‘N snap hands hard on lap
My treasure’s in the Cloud!
Its debut leaves me proud!

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2 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. jmpoland21van
    Sep 29, 2013 @ 18:34:18

    I hope you enjoy this challenge from Reowr,
    Jeanne Poland

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  2. frizztext
    Sep 30, 2013 @ 02:54:43

    resume of our modern times:
    +
    “My treasure’s in the Cloud!
    My i-Mac stored it there!
    Its debut leaves me proud.
    +
    Six poets found it: “wow’d”
    My writing in the air!
    My treasure’s in the Cloud!”

    Like

    Reply

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